Editing update

I am busy, busy, busy working on The Gabardi Memoir. I emailed the word document to my Kindle yesterday to read through from beginning to end. The trick is to read it from beginning to end without stopping to take notes. 

That was a tip I read years ago in a writers how to book, because the temptation is to stop and make a note of something that bugs you. However, in doing that, you lose the flow and don't read it properly, or read it as a reader will read it. So you should read it through and not stop. Which I did and..Hallelujah... I really, really like the story. I have quite a bit of editing to do before I send it away for a second look, with an aim to publish on Amazon in early February.

I would really like to do another story in this world. There are three Gabardi brothers, and I planned it as three books, but I will just have to be creative and come up with another person worthy of the name Gabardi for another venture into Gabardi world!

Here is the BUY NOW link to Amazon for the first two books.

 

The Gabardi Memoir

 

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